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My Wish

Author: od9.1.04
ASL Info:    15/f/oh
Elite Ratio:    1.68 - 18 /38 /19
Words: 114
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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My Wish

I wish that I was with you
Wish I was in your arms
I wish that you too
Never felt harm.

I wish you think
Wish you think about me
I wish your brain would tick
And with me live happily.

I wish we were together
Wish we were side by side
Holding eachother forever
Wishing untill we die.

I wish I could be in your hold
Wish I was in your presence
Longing for you to warm my cold
Feeling love's essence.

I wish you will be my love
Wish you were that person
And hope you are the only one
With you my life is certain.

Submitted on 2006-07-24 22:29:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  its soooo cute and sweet!!! i am loving your work so far gurl. it seems like u and i have a lot in common mayb one day ill im you. i love it!!!!!!
| Posted on 2006-08-02 00:00:00 | by sravenlyn | [ Reply to This ]
  Awwwl chey, this is a beautiful poem also. I am a huge fan of your works dear.

| Posted on 2006-07-24 00:00:00 | by remedy bayden | [ Reply to This ]
  awww is right! this is really cute!! and beautiful!! i really like it!!! good joB!
short and sweet!!
| Posted on 2006-07-24 00:00:00 | by secretmystery_1 | [ Reply to This ]
  I liked this one and i can relate. I wish every day that my ex was thinking about me or that he actually cared weather i live or die. I loved it good job.
| Posted on 2006-07-25 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]

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