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Missing You

Author: cbgurl413
ASL Info:    15/F/RI
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Words: 86
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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I miss my dear "friend" Bobby... so here is a little something for him...

Missing You

July 25 2006

Missing You

You're not here
To hold me near
Nights are too long
Without you I'm wrong
I hear your voice
It was all your choice
I try to get through
But It's all so new

Missing You

Life is incomplete
My heart tries to compete
I try to stay a float
I'm so much full of hope
Miles in between
With your name I feel serene
With the future in view
I will be true

Missing You

Submitted on 2006-07-24 23:50:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  =] awhh this is sad and nice though. im in love with crystal everyone. haha
| Posted on 2006-08-20 00:00:00 | by DontLetGo421 | [ Reply to This ]

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