Missing You

Author: cbgurl413 ASL Info:    15/F/RI Elite Ratio:    1.86 - 23 /22 /24 Words: 86

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Missing You

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July 25 2006 Missing You You're not here To hold me near Nights are too long Without you I'm wrong I hear your voice It was all your choice I try to get through But It's all so new Missing You Life is incomplete My heart tries to compete I try to stay a float I'm so much full of hope Miles in between With your name I feel serene With the future in view I will be true Missing You

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=] awhh this is sad and nice though. im in love with crystal everyone. haha

| Posted on 2006-08-20 00:00:00 | by DontLetGo421 | [ Reply to This ]

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