Now, first off, I have a question. What's the proper way to spell color? I see lots of people around here spelling it with a 'u' and I was always taught that it didnt have a 'u'. I cant find the word colour in any dictionary either. Just wondering if you knew?
I am a sucker for writing that can capture a feeling or emotion and "take the reader there", as this one did. The ending wasnt particularly strong though. Maybe swapping the last two stanzas? Hmmm...I dunno...just rambling and thinking.
Anyway, I liked the Morrison part, that was very good.