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Speaking Word

Author: Poeticprincess
ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 333 /325 /104
Words: 144
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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i don't know where this came from but tell me what u think.

Speaking Word

am i speaking word?
or am i rappin
if i want something done
i make it happen
cause i know they won't do shit
at least not for me
they didn't believe i could spit
now i'll make them see

i was speaking word for real
but now i'm rappin
while i let dogs lay
the cats will keep on nappin
they slackin
but the works up to me
'cause now some think i can't spit
i gotta make 'em see

i can speak word fast
but rap even fasta
i'm here to show 'em all
i'm the lyrical masta
fucking up they train of thoughts
with my inteliect and style
they walk to steps
and i walked the mile

but rap ain't all i did
it's just all those people heard
'cause remeber before i started rappin
i spoke word.....

Submitted on 2006-07-25 13:22:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  [censored] up they train of thoughts
with my inteliect and style
they walk to steps
and i walked the mile

best part of this one. ur pretty good but ur still a fledgeling rapper. i am too. i can't even compare myself to some of the emcees on this site like orpheus, xtremegentleman, and SinCeer05 cuz their vocab and ablitiy to put words together just amaze me. we both have a lotta work to do in the rapping department
| Posted on 2006-08-04 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
  this was pretty good..I know u do what you do girl, keep ya head up
| Posted on 2006-07-25 00:00:00 | by maninthemirror | [ Reply to This ]

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