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    dots Submission Name: Speaking Worddots
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    Author: Poeticprincess
    ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
    Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 333/325/104
    Words: 144
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 810
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       i don't know where this came from but tell me what u think.


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    dotsSpeaking Worddots
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    am i speaking word?
    or am i rappin
    if i want something done
    i make it happen
    cause i know they won't do shit
    at least not for me
    they didn't believe i could spit
    now i'll make them see

    i was speaking word for real
    but now i'm rappin
    while i let dogs lay
    the cats will keep on nappin
    they slackin
    but the works up to me
    'cause now some think i can't spit
    i gotta make 'em see

    i can speak word fast
    but rap even fasta
    i'm here to show 'em all
    i'm the lyrical masta
    fucking up they train of thoughts
    with my inteliect and style
    they walk to steps
    and i walked the mile

    but rap ain't all i did
    it's just all those people heard
    'cause remeber before i started rappin
    i spoke word.....




    Submitted on 2006-07-25 13:22:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      [censored] up they train of thoughts
    with my inteliect and style
    they walk to steps
    and i walked the mile

    best part of this one. ur pretty good but ur still a fledgeling rapper. i am too. i can't even compare myself to some of the emcees on this site like orpheus, xtremegentleman, and SinCeer05 cuz their vocab and ablitiy to put words together just amaze me. we both have a lotta work to do in the rapping department
    | Posted on 2006-08-04 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      this was pretty good..I know u do what you do girl, keep ya head up
    | Posted on 2006-07-25 00:00:00 | by maninthemirror | [ Reply to This ]


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