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    dots Submission Name: Pieces of my Heartdots
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    Author: CynicalxDreamer
    ASL Info:    24
    Elite Ratio:    2.54 - 39/84/54
    Words: 310
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 144
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1877



    Description:
       The more people fall in love, the more often that person becomes jaded when love fails. At least, that's the way it is for some people.

    I always think that the memories of those we loved are mostly kept intact by how much of our heart we gave them. And this is a play on that idea...that the reason we remember them..is because our body yearns for those pieces of our hearts to be returned.

    Or at least replaced.


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    dotsPieces of my Heartdots
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    I can feel it already welling up inside
    That familiar taint of remeniscing
    On things that could have been
    But never came to be in this life

    Remembering the sad songs I sang
    Tunes that connected to me inside
    As I wonder where you are now
    How you are doing without me

    I can remember how your hair looked
    How your smiles could fill my heart
    But would you even recall my name
    Let alone the face that watched you

    Staring into your eyes I felt important
    But am I now even a a memory?
    Is there a place for me in your past
    Or am I just a shadow of time

    People who I still think about now and then
    Wondering what it would have been like
    Maybe I would be worse then I am now
    Or perhaps I'd not regret the decisions made

    But the questions still linger in my mind
    Ghosts of mistakes that haunt me still
    Scratching at parts of my heart I don't have
    As those pieces were given to you long ago

    I'll never have those parts of me back again
    Always with you, part of my emotional history
    Scars etched into tissue that will never grow back
    Amputated from the organ as I felt I was in love

    Do you remember my tears of longing?
    Or the eyes they fell from?
    And would you remember my support and care
    When you finally look back in your mind

    Am I still standing there somewhere in your head?
    Just seeming to wait on and on for you to notice
    Maybe that's why time seems to never change
    Because I'm frozen in a dream, waiting

    To be remembered
    To recieve that love I gave
    To be given the pieces back
    That my heart has been missing...




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