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    dots Submission Name: One Voicedots
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    Author: CynicalxDreamer
    ASL Info:    24
    Elite Ratio:    2.57 - 39/83/49
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Venting
    Total Views: 110
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 920



    Description:
       I was listening to some freestylin' and after hearing Nas' 'One Mike', it got me along this line of thinking. After repeating the beginning lines of this poem, I just started writing and this is what came out in the end.


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    dotsOne Voicedots
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    One voice
    One choice
    One man
    One stand
    An ideal
    That I feel
    Brought forth
    For all its worth
    Tired of this hypocracy
    Of choices made for me
    By people who can't see
    Their own destiny
    Shout out
    All about
    The injustice
    Of the prejudice
    The blind
    With no mind
    Living yesterday
    Not seeing today
    How can they plan
    How can they understand
    Who I am and what I say
    When they're not part of today
    No limit
    Don't quit
    Don't die
    Don't cry
    Fight on
    Live on
    Speak your mind
    Leave them behind
    Make your on choice
    With one voice
    Bring it to playing field
    Don't give up, don't yield
    Keep going into tommorrow
    And let them live with past sorrow




    Submitted on 2006-07-25 13:55:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i like this, it was hot. I also like nas so it's cool that you made this thinking along the lines of this song. Anyways i'ma add this to my favorites.
    Good Job.

    Lady D
    | Posted on 2006-07-25 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ]
      I like it. There's a nice message in it. Simple and nice flow; it kept me reading through to the end.
    *faves*
    | Posted on 2006-07-25 00:00:00 | by raineces | [ Reply to This ]
      This is real good, I read the words & heard the music. you have me waiting for the second number. Keep'em comming.
    | Posted on 2006-07-25 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]



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