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    dots Submission Name: Drain Youdots
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    Author: shayla8911
    ASL Info:    19/f/sd
    Elite Ratio:    2.93 - 78/85/43
    Words: 164
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 147
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1013



    Description:
       kind of a song type thing i wrote a long time ago. Thought it was edgy, dark, and mysterious in a sense. I suppose I enjoyed it so i put it in here with all the others.


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    dotsDrain Youdots
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    Can I cut you with my words,
    Suck your blood until it hurts?
    Drain you dry so you don't feel,
    Relax this earth was never real.

    Blood drips out your buldging veins,
    I guess I'm the one to blame.
    Why don't you just let it go,
    I won't drain your blood too low.

    Can I slit you with my mouth?
    Open up and let it out.
    Taste your pain upon my lips.
    Sweet and tender are my licks.
    See your fears in all the red,
    All the horrible things I said.
    Satisfied I seal you up,
    There is a bruise where I have sucked.

    Relax, it is all okay.
    I tilt your head back,
    I watch you lay.
    One day I might break the seal,
    Relax, this earth was never real.

    Blood runs throug your bulging veins.
    Now you'll never be the same.
    Why don't you just let it go.
    I didn't drain your blood too low.





    Submitted on 2006-07-26 10:59:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i love the liquid electricity, the blue juice, the blood. i love the way it tastes. i love it all. this is a very good piece and it makes me remember the flavor in my mouth. i hope to read more by you soon. this is very good. how long have you been into it???
    tina
    | Posted on 2006-08-07 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked the way this poem flows. It is dark yet in a way peaceful. It sounds weird but this is definitely going on my favorites. Peace
    Katana
    | Posted on 2006-07-26 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ]



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