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    dots Submission Name: Roll of Thunderdots
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    Author: lover_gurl
    ASL Info:    16/F/Indiana
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 9/5/9
    Words: 192
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Depressed
    Total Views: 674
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1192



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    dotsRoll of Thunderdots
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    Verse 1
    The sound of thunder fills the place,
    a tear of joy runs down her face.
    Happy she no longer has to live this life,
    she smiles as she holds the knife.

    Chorus
    Roll of thunder, do you hear her crying?
    Roll of thunder, it gets her by.
    When you look deep into her eyes,
    you see she's sad but you do nothing

    Verse 2
    She starts to think, as she holds it steady,
    any thought that upsets her, she'll be ready.
    As she looks back on all her friends,
    she thinks it's not right for it to end.
    (repeat chorus)

    Bridge
    Clahses of thunder bring her back,
    she sees the bad with each crack.
    Pressing harder with the knife against her skin,
    she says she can't do it no matter how bad within.

    Roll of thunder, hear her crying
    Roll of thunder, gets her by
    Just look deep in her eyes,
    you'll see she's sad but you'll do nothing
    (repeat chorus)

    As tears of sadness run down her face,
    she knows the roll of thunder will always be her escape




    Submitted on 2006-07-26 14:08:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Wow, I really like this song! It shows true emotion and I like that! Awesome!
    Check ya l8r
    | Posted on 2006-07-28 00:00:00 | by BlueHeart | [ Reply to This ]
      good poem talk to ya la8ter
    | Posted on 2006-07-28 00:00:00 | by Amberger | [ Reply to This ]


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