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    dots Submission Name: * Confused Lovedots
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    Author: Caotic_Disaster
    ASL Info:    16/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 447/349/148
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dots* Confused Lovedots
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    You tell me you love me
    But I don't know what to say
    Do I believe you
    I don't know why i should
    You have lied before
    What will make you stop

    You said "i love you" before
    To some other girl
    And now to me
    You're not with her anymore
    And im greatful for that
    But that doesn't prove
    That if you could have her you would
    And I would be history

    I have forgave you before
    But i don't know how many more times i can
    You tell me one thing
    And do another
    What did i do to deserve this?




    Submitted on 2006-07-26 14:23:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this poem made me very sad because i know this really happens, and you dont deserve it!!! hear me you dont, no one does. *hugs* you are an amazing person and you are beautiful inside and out and if this person can see that in you and doesnt respect you and cherish you. well i really dont think that they deserve YOU then. stay stong and keep your chin up.

    keep up the great writes too :)
    Diary
    | Posted on 2006-08-25 00:00:00 | by Diarygrl | [ Reply to This ]
      this is a really interesting poem, i like it and i hope that w/e is going on with u and ur b/f or w/e works out.

    -Nick-
    | Posted on 2006-07-26 00:00:00 | by newbee | [ Reply to This ]


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