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    dots Submission Name: A Wordless Crydots

    Author: Musically Inc.
    ASL Info:    20/ F/Long Island, Ny /
    Elite Ratio:    1.29 - 0/2/14
    Words: 391
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/
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       I have no idea what made me write this, but I was sitting in english and I just started to write it. Certain things pop into my head that I just have to write down and this poem was one of them.

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    dotsA Wordless Crydots

    Just when you think it's over it comes right back.
    10 times as worse, then 100 times as worse. I've tried to escape it but I can't, everytime I get close to the top I fall back in.
    It's dark, as dark as a night sky wiith no stars or moon. I cry inside, but on the outside i show anger and aggression. I feel like I cannot love. Like the whole world hates me.
    No one can help me or save me, sad attempts have been made but none have succeeded.
    I feel alone. No one really loves me , i want to cry a million tears but I can't. The tears won't come.
    I have thought of everything to improve myself for others, but it doesn't work.
    I want to die, jump off a house and end everyone's pain...
    My pain and misery.
    I feel useless and unwanted.
    Help me... no one answers, my cries are swallowed by the darkness.
    Invisable, no one sees me or cares I'm alive.
    1,2,3, slashes to my arm. I watch the blood trickle down my arm. the pain encourages me to enflict more pain.
    4,5,6, No one cares!
    I'm screaming now.
    Locked inside myself, 1 tear slowly glides down my face.
    Suddenly I smile ,and start to laugh.
    Uncontrolable anger swarms over my body like a fever rises.
    I starty to fling things everywhere, smshing everything in sight.
    I'm bleeding everywhere now... Flash!... a light streaks across my face.
    I stagger towards the mirror.
    I open my eyes.
    There's a slash going across my eye.
    Dripping blood I crawl into a ball.
    Slowly my life is fading.
    The mirror falls sending pieces of shaddered glass everywhere.
    1 more tear falls from my eye and complete darkness overcomes my body.

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