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    dots Submission Name: The Years Gone Bydots
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    Author: EseanB
    ASL Info:    30/M/TN
    Elite Ratio:    2.38 - 99/138/84
    Words: 190
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 427
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1255



    Description:
       Written for a female friend I have not seen for 9 years.


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    dotsThe Years Gone Bydots
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    Past, present, and future,
    What was, what is, and what could have been,
    Do these questions deserve to be answered?

    If I knew then what I know now,
    Where would I be,
    How would I look?

    Too many “what ifs”,
    No power to reverse time,
    So we must accept the roads we traveled.

    Lessons were learned,
    Tragedies made us stronger and wiser,
    Fate prepares us for the years to come.

    Ten years ago our lives were run by depression,
    Our classmates were not worth a handshake,
    In such a small class we still knew very little about each other.

    Crushes, fears, and broken spirits,
    Outcasts surrounded by darkness that is the world,
    Where was our light in the madness that is now past?

    Our paths have crossed again almost ten years later,
    On this road that was left undiscovered until now,
    Our friendship begins anew.

    Take my hand as I take yours,
    Walking down this unknown road,
    Reminiscing about the years gone by.

    Learning about each other,
    Realizing things we never knew,
    And witnessing our friendship as it grows closer.




    Submitted on 2006-07-27 05:20:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      DAM!... you seek to amaze me. What if's! Also there always asked.. never seemed to be answered and if so never the answer we like.. too many questions and never enough answers.. as time passes you know people change things change.. life changes! and you do a GREAT job in decribing this in this poem... "The Years Gone By" amazing job yet again! can't wait to read more

    ~*Jackie*~
    | Posted on 2006-07-27 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]


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