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    dots Submission Name: Untitled #300?dots
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    Author: Abby Sinthetic
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 177/230/53
    Words: 47
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       I think I was still a little drunk. And full of spite.


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    dotsUntitled #300?dots
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    I am a
    Goddess of Self-destruction
    Devil in Thigh-Highs
    High-Priestess of Lies
    and I am undead
    Your love cannot touch me
    So don't even try
    I'm locked inside
    Every time we fuck
    Don't worry
    I don't feel a thing.




    Submitted on 2006-07-27 15:01:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      eek, a little bleak. I hate to see you write this way but I guess it's better to get it out then to keep it in.
    | Posted on 2006-07-27 00:00:00 | by joe quinn | [ Reply to This ]
      My Love can too touch you, you whore you!!!!! I Love It I Love It I Love It I Love It!!!! To a point I'm hoping thats not true.... [censored] for no reason can be fun but *shrug*.... not overly. I do love this one though.... favorites!!!!!!
    | Posted on 2006-07-27 00:00:00 | by morbidkittie | [ Reply to This ]


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