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All I Ask For


Author: Foreseer
ASL Info:    20/F/In Love
Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 156 /86 /23
Words: 185
Class/Type: Lyrics /Misc
Total Views: 1090
Average Vote:    4.0000
Bytes: 1241



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Okay, these are my first lyrics. So I don't know how they came out.


All I Ask For



The truth is not what
it appears to be.
It's hidden
everywhere.
It was you and me
and this mystery.
It's tearin'
us apart.

[Chorus:]
Why can't you believe in me?
And tell me what's real.
Why can't you trust in me?
It's all I ask for
All I ask for...

I guess this is not true,
evern though we wish so.
It'll never be that way
but we can't give up.
We have to stay together,
just you and me.
But...

[Chorus:]
Why can't you believe in me?
And tell me what's real.
Why can't you trust in me?
It's all I ask for.
All I ask for...yeah.

It's all I ask for.
Is that you trust me.
Is that you believe in me.
Is it so much to ask for?

I can't wait any longer,
my heart is breaking.
The pain I feel,
you seem blind to.
I'm fading slowly,
whatever's left of me.
I leave in your hands.

But I think I'll
Trust you, forever...forever.




Submitted on 2006-07-27 19:00:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  It's angry, I like it. I know a lot of people and relate, since I bet everyone has wanted trust from someone who doesn't have it. I like the little detail at the end that remarks acceptence. Really good. (And thanks for liking my piece!)
| Posted on 2006-08-02 00:00:00 | by Castalia | [ Reply to This ]
  This is good...and i can relate im havind those issues so yeah really good job

Brittany
| Posted on 2006-07-29 00:00:00 | by dark_secrets_ | [ Reply to This ]
  i really liked this. if you make it into a song i'ma buy your single! i can relate with the whole trust part of it. keep writing...
</3 lisa
| Posted on 2006-07-27 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]


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