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    dots Submission Name: Fantasydots
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    Author: 777sacrites777
    ASL Info:    24/F/TX
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 343/189/83
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    dotsFantasydots
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    I created this illusion
    and past it i could not see.
    It fooled me into believing
    that you truly still loved me.

    But this fantasy had died,
    the truth had been let out.
    You two-timed me with ease,
    i was something you could live without.

    I left behind my broken past,
    it's in this rear-view mirror.
    From your lies I drove away fast,
    my escape soon grew nearer.

    The tears start to pour,
    they begin to blur my vision.
    My mind now plays no role,
    then there's a head on collision.

    I see the life drain out of me,
    it's fate's only plan.
    Since you wouldn't love me,
    i guess now no one can...




    Submitted on 2006-07-27 20:44:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this poem alot & i know wut u r/were going thru b/c sumthin like this happened 2 me & i felt like that 2. Well keep up the good work.

    {{ Lynoire }}
    | Posted on 2006-08-06 00:00:00 | by bloodydreamer27 | [ Reply to This ]
      real.... blam...i so got hit over the head
    and if someone loved me and had that
    pain -i would make me try and be better
    person for my next love-
    i liked
    | Posted on 2006-07-28 00:00:00 | by ms.v | [ Reply to This ]


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