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Dancer


Author: Aetha Daemon
Elite Ratio:    6.81 - 91 /56 /29
Words: 42
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Description:


A dancer


Dancer



DANCER
spinning
dipping
twirling
whirling
hand brush
ground soft
head up
toes out
poised
energy flowing
through every
perfect
line
and curve
and gracefull pose
eyes shut
lips apart
fingers
part in gentle sweeps
and point
into oblivion
and perfect peace




Submitted on 2006-07-27 21:50:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I agree, the simplicity and style was nice. I take it you also know your stuff when it comes to dancing.

~Corbs
| Posted on 2006-08-15 00:00:00 | by Corbow6 | [ Reply to This ]
  Hm, I do like the words, and how you described what the dancer does. I think you could rearrange it to some lines for a smoother read. These are the lines I like:

eyes shut, lips apart,
fingers part in gentle sweeps;
and point into oblivion
and perfect peace.

I enjoyed its simplicity. T'care.
| Posted on 2006-07-27 00:00:00 | by raineces | [ Reply to This ]


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