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I Saw My Mind Away


Author: Aetha Daemon
Elite Ratio:    6.81 - 91 /56 /29
Words: 120
Class/Type: Poetry /Comedy
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Average Vote:    4.5000
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This is a bit crazy...must warn you!


I Saw My Mind Away



I jumped down out of bed,
Got up and donned my night clothes.
I saw my rug high overhead
And nearly burned my toes

Up through door and out the stairs,
and rolling up the shower,
I went into the window and
I danced among the flowers

A lizard in the Arctic,
A seagull o’er the sand,
A cowboy lost upon the sea
What strangeness is at hand?

My dog was at the table,
My wife gone to 5th grade,
My kids were drinking coffee,
And holding hand granades

To fun I ran with gone my mind
I saw the sky below,
And never looked behind myself
Into the world I know




Submitted on 2006-07-27 22:22:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like the twisted way you think! (smile) This was real good and I hope to read many more from you!
Kelley Frost
| Posted on 2006-10-21 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
  Hey sweetie, I love your poetry lol! By the way, it is EXACTLY like my own...
| Posted on 2006-08-16 00:00:00 | by Maevity | [ Reply to This ]
  wot an imagination you have!! this is wonderful stuff, i was grinning from start to finish. you have put a huge smile on my face, thank you. excellent piece.
whirl**
| Posted on 2006-08-12 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]
  I love this poem! It's remanicent of Ginsburg and Burrougs. I love the way you paint immages like abstract art thats random and doesn't quite fit." My kids were drinking cofee and holding hand granades" Graet work! looking forward to reading more!

Bonnie
| Posted on 2006-07-29 00:00:00 | by wildflower | [ Reply to This ]


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