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    dots Submission Name: Destined To Faildots
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    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 862
    Average Vote:    1.0000
    Bytes: 794



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       Life's a bitch no matter how much happiness I endure, the right person to give me the cure, is so far from bieng clear but obscure... Marco


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    dotsDestined To Faildots
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    Exhaled from poisoned semen,
    A re-incarnation perhaps,
    Comes the story of me,
    Coming from a family of shouting
    And screaming,
    These raging paragraphs,
    Will not let me be.

    How can you ease pain,
    When you're alwas pointed at,
    How lame;
    I grew up with nothing,
    Will die with nothing,
    And a rough childhood,
    Is all I blame.

    I came to a conclusion,
    That this intrusion,
    Of worthless struggle,
    Is going to dig my grave,
    Without a need,
    For a shovel.

    Or perhaps,
    With the misery I seem to attract,
    I'm always trying to dwell,
    On the simple ideal;
    That perhaps,
    I was destined to fail.




    Submitted on 2006-07-28 02:30:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      alwas.... always,,,...
    re-encarnation..... A re-incarnation
    before I forget

    Exhaled from poisoned semen.. powerful start
    but just so you know, noone is destined to fall, their begining is never their end..look at the great people of the world.. not many of them came from silver spoons and happy childhoods...
    I try to live by the idea of I think therefor I am...
    | Posted on 2006-07-28 00:00:00 | by mimi | [ Reply to This ]
      youve embraced your fate... you reaction to this is your answer
    a truly glorious thing!
    | Posted on 2006-07-28 00:00:00 | by blackhart | [ Reply to This ]


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