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    dots Submission Name: littlest thingsdots
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    Author: secret kisses
    ASL Info:    22/f/uk
    Elite Ratio:    2.81 - 558/438/138
    Words: 341
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 1008
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    Description:
       this is the lyrics to a lilly allen track, thought it was beautiful so i decided to share it with you all.
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    sometimes i find myself sitting back and reminising/
    especialy when i see other people kissing/
    and i remember when you started calling me your misses/
    all the play fighting and flirtatious disses/
    i told you sad stories about my childhood/
    i dont know why i trusted you but i knew that i could./
    we would spend the the whole weekend lying in our dirt/
    i was just so happy in your boxers and your t-shirt/

    dreams dreams of when we had just started things/
    dreams of you and me/
    and it seems it seems that i cant shake thos memories/
    and i wonder if you have the same dreams too/

    the littlest things that take me there/
    i know it sounds laim but its so true/
    i know its not right but it seems unfair/
    things are reminding me of you/
    sometimes i just wish we could pretend/
    even if only for one weekend/
    so come on/
    tell me is this the end?/

    drinking tea in bed and watching DVD's/
    thats when i discovered all your dirty grotty magazines/
    you take me out shopping and all we would buy is trainers/
    as if we ever needed anything to entertain us/
    the first time that time you introduced me to your friends/
    and u could tell that i was nervous so you held my hand/
    when i was feeling down you made that face you do/
    theres no one in the world who could replace you/

    dreams dreams of when we had just started things/
    dreams of you and me/
    and it seems it seems that i cant shake thos memories/
    and i wonder if you have the same dreams too/

    the littlest things that take me there/
    i know it sounds laim but its so true/
    i know its not right but it seems unfair/
    things are reminding me of you/
    sometimes i just wish we could pretend/
    even if only for one weekend/
    so come on/
    tell me is this the end?/






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      its a vast great illusion
    itll catch you
    you wont want to let go
    the drug of love
    so much is it like war
    easy to begin
    hard to stop

    i have no missgivings of these things
    im glad actually
    good call on your part.
    | Posted on 2006-07-28 00:00:00 | by blackhart | [ Reply to This ]


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