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Author:	tina_mik
ASL Info:	17/f/malaysia
Elite Ratio:	1.99 - 21/22/20
Words:	90

Class/Type:	Poetry/Depressed
Total Views:	150
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You

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i look your way
you turn and look away,
why do i hold on?
when there's no hope to carry on,
i'm ready to give
but are you willing to take?
you smile joyfully
but never because of me.
i cannot hate you
'cos my heart care for you,
i will try to forget you
now that i realize
my dream will never come true.
i tried to get close
but you kept your distance,
the door to my heart is open
but you never realize 'til its broken.

Submitted on 2006-07-28 12:20:54 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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That is very personal.... here is something that might help give you strength. Not my writing, but beautiful and inspiring. Read this and remember it. I know that rejection hurts. But, you will get past it.

LET IT GO... by T. D. Jakes

There are people who will walk away from you. And hear me when I tell you this! When people can walk away from you: let them walk.

I don't want you to try to talk another person into staying with you, loving you, calling you, caring about you, coming to see you, staying attached to you. I mean hang up the phone! When people can walk away from you let them walk. Your destiny is never tied to anybody that left.

The bible said that, they came out from us that it might be made manifest that they were not for us. For had they been of us, no doubt they would have continued with us. [1 John 2:19]

People leave you because they are not joined to you. And if they are not joined to you, you cannot make them stay. LET THEM GO. And it doesn’t mean that they are a bad person it just means that their part in the story is over.

And you've got to know when people's part in your story is over so that you don't keep trying to raise the dead. You've got to know when it's dead. You've got to know when it's over. Let me tell you something. I've got the gift of good-bye. It's the tenth spiritual gift, I believe in good-bye. It's not that I'm hateful, it's that I'm faithful, and I know whatever God means for me to have He'll give it to me. And if it takes too much sweat I don't need it. Stop begging people to stay… Let them go!!!

If someone can't treat you right, love you back, and see your worth... LET IT GO!!!

The right person will see your true worth.
| Posted on 2006-07-28 00:00:00 | by maiya | [ Reply to This ]
I felt a lot like this a couple of moths ago. It was really difficult, and it seemed like no matter how hard I tried . . . .. . . . . . . I could not win. The rhyming did not seem force whatsoever like they do in a lot of poem . . . . . . like mine
| Posted on 2006-07-28 00:00:00 | by GothamFreak | [ Reply to This ]

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