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    dots Submission Name: Scarlett Blossomsdots
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    Author: lynn marsters
    ASL Info:    20/f/canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.41 - 49/61/32
    Words: 35
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 964
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 284



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    dotsScarlett Blossomsdots
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    Metallic flavor
    of
    the
    Scarlett blossoms

    Cascading
    down
    her
    face

    Slowly drips
    onto his lips

    Oh! the beauty,
    he did exclaim,
    Oh! the beauty
    of the pain





    Submitted on 2006-07-28 14:09:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      oh my. sadism, blood, possible vampiric influence, all in such a short work? I wold love to know what promted this to come to mind. The form is sparse, yet conveys the concept nicely. One question: if blod is so full of iron, why does it taste like copper?

    Ignis Fatuus
    | Posted on 2007-08-16 00:00:00 | by Ignis Fatuus | [ Reply to This ]
      i've never read a poem like this before and i think it is fantastic... i added it to my favourite...

    "Oh! the beauty
    of the pain"

    the last line and its so captivating.. i love it



    MDP
    | Posted on 2007-08-15 00:00:00 | by MysterydarkPoet | [ Reply to This ]
      wonderful... provocative. just the right amount of simplicity. thsi piece envokes many images all a relentless passion and desire
    | Posted on 2006-07-28 00:00:00 | by blackhart | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this a lot. it sounds a little sadistic but its good. hey, aren't we all sadists sometimes??? oh well. very good work. keep posting. i would love to read more by you soon. you are an awesome writer.
    love tina
    | Posted on 2006-07-28 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]


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