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Metallic flavor of the Scarlett blossoms Cascading down her face Slowly drips onto his lips Oh! the beauty, he did exclaim, Oh! the beauty of the pain |
oh my. sadism, blood, possible vampiric influence, all in such a short work? I wold love to know what promted this to come to mind. The form is sparse, yet conveys the concept nicely. One question: if blod is so full of iron, why does it taste like copper? Ignis Fatuus | Posted on 2007-08-16 00:00:00 | by Ignis Fatuus | [ Reply to This ] | i've never read a poem like this before and i think it is fantastic... i added it to my favourite... | ![]() "Oh! the beauty of the pain" the last line and its so captivating.. i love it ![]() MDP | Posted on 2007-08-15 00:00:00 | by MysterydarkPoet | [ Reply to This ] | wonderful... provocative. just the right amount of simplicity. thsi piece envokes many images all a relentless passion and desire | | Posted on 2006-07-28 00:00:00 | by blackhart | [ Reply to This ] | i like this a lot. it sounds a little sadistic but its good. hey, aren't we all sadists sometimes??? oh well. very good work. keep posting. i would love to read more by you soon. you are an awesome writer. | love tina | Posted on 2006-07-28 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ] | |