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Scarlett Blossoms


Author: lynn marsters
ASL Info:    20/f/canada
Elite Ratio:    3.41 - 49 /61 /32
Words: 35
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Scarlett Blossoms


Metallic flavor
of
the
Scarlett blossoms

Cascading
down
her
face

Slowly drips
onto his lips

Oh! the beauty,
he did exclaim,
Oh! the beauty
of the pain





Submitted on 2006-07-28 14:09:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  oh my. sadism, blood, possible vampiric influence, all in such a short work? I wold love to know what promted this to come to mind. The form is sparse, yet conveys the concept nicely. One question: if blod is so full of iron, why does it taste like copper?

Ignis Fatuus
| Posted on 2007-08-16 00:00:00 | by Ignis Fatuus | [ Reply to This ]
  i've never read a poem like this before and i think it is fantastic... i added it to my favourite...

"Oh! the beauty
of the pain"

the last line and its so captivating.. i love it



MDP
| Posted on 2007-08-15 00:00:00 | by MysterydarkPoet | [ Reply to This ]
  wonderful... provocative. just the right amount of simplicity. thsi piece envokes many images all a relentless passion and desire
| Posted on 2006-07-28 00:00:00 | by blackhart | [ Reply to This ]
  i like this a lot. it sounds a little sadistic but its good. hey, aren't we all sadists sometimes??? oh well. very good work. keep posting. i would love to read more by you soon. you are an awesome writer.
love tina
| Posted on 2006-07-28 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]


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