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    dots Submission Name: Find My Waydots
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    Author: GothamFreak
    Elite Ratio:    5.1 - 110/48/19
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/Trapped
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    dotsFind My Waydots
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    will I ever find my way
    against the current
    of this monstrous world

    with goals to achieve
    fears to overcome
    and love to find

    will I ever find my way
    accross the ocean
    on the right path
    the path that leads
    not one astray

    will I every find my way?




    Submitted on 2006-07-28 14:31:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      THANKSS FOR COMMENTING MY POEM AND WRITE BAQ ATCHA I LIKE THIS ONE!

    MUCH LUV TAKE CARE,


    BE HAPPY FOR THE SMALL THINGS LIFE IS GOOD.
    | Posted on 2006-09-22 00:00:00 | by Ani | [ Reply to This ]
      Will I ever find my way
    against the current
    of this monstrous world

    with goals to achieve
    fears to overcome
    and love to find

    Will I ever find my way
    accross the ocean
    on [to] the right path,
    the path that leads
    not one astray

    Will I ever[] find my way?


    A very insightful and questioning write. I found within this a need to find out answers, which I liked a lot. This write sounded a little like a prayer in some area's, and maybe you meant it to be. You kept this short and simple, and I liked that.


    Abbas
    | Posted on 2006-08-13 00:00:00 | by abuzzbuzz92 | [ Reply to This ]
      Bring it, Hence forth another day. Oh my, Hence forth another day. This sucks, Hence forth another day. Today was awesome, I can hardly wait for tommorow. What's that you say how,why,what, ahh shut up just toss it in the back of the truck we got travelling to do. Hence the words spoken from a very wise hobbit a dear friend of mine {when traveling pack light for you never know where your feet just might sweep you off to} Or something like that. LIfe and I repeat Life is in itself a journey even just the beginning. As to accomplishing. One must free them selfes from heavy rocks when crossing streams. Each little nitch that itche's you foward you must hold on to in some special way. If need be use it latter for encouragement. To continue with your journey. If ever you want to be into question then late at night look up into the sky and marvel. also know that there is a plan, as far as that goes I say keep an open mind. The one that knows all things see's the yearning heart and sends opportunites that may call for some investigation on your part. Thank you for the read. Remember life is a fine gift. Do take the time to enjoy it.

    Sincerely Gannondalf aka Big Bear
    | Posted on 2006-07-31 00:00:00 | by Gannondalf | [ Reply to This ]
      questions, questions and MORE questions.
    hope you will find all the answers...
    try searching deep within your heart, if all fails you just have to except every day as it comes : )
    Cheer up ya!
    | Posted on 2006-07-29 00:00:00 | by tina_mik | [ Reply to This ]
      That's a perfect example of what goes through my mind (daily) as well.
    | Posted on 2006-07-28 00:00:00 | by Full Truth | [ Reply to This ]
      dude is alright. ur smart. youll find ur way. dont sweat it. dont worry.yoooooo nice one.

    peace out yooo.

    Da Grim Reaperessssss
    | Posted on 2006-08-20 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]


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