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    dots Submission Name: about a frienddots
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    Author: tina_mik
    ASL Info:    17/f/malaysia
    Elite Ratio:    1.99 - 21/22/20
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 113
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 701



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    dotsabout a frienddots
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    all this while i've never known
    true feelings she has never shown
    secrets of her past has finally revealed
    i'm glad she did it at her will
    how i wish she had known earlier
    how i wish her vision was clearer
    some memories are meant to be forgotten
    i hope she'll make the right decision
    listen i did to words of sorrow
    hoping she'll find a better tomorrow
    to erase everything that is unkind
    hoping she will not be left behind
    mixed emotions crowding my mind
    how i wish i could make things right
    but none of my thoughts have come to light.









    Submitted on 2006-07-29 05:53:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Great rhyming poem!! I've tryed these many times, yet find them difficult and the meaning lost. You did a great job hanging onto the meaning and still following the pattern.

    Bonnie
    | Posted on 2006-07-30 00:00:00 | by wildflower | [ Reply to This ]



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