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    dots Submission Name: You Never Knew Medots
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    Author: Kamisamanou
    ASL Info:    18/Male/The Plateau
    Elite Ratio:    0.8 - 0/2/7
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Me
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    Description:
       6th poem. Written about myself. Written on Feb. 11, 2006. 2006 Kamisamanou Burgess


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    dotsYou Never Knew Medots
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    I am a book with a lock and key,
    the key of which I held to myself.

    The cover, I was happy to let you see and read,
    but even I myself didn't unlock it to see,
    the complexities of which I was composed.

    But after a decade I find myself,
    with the book unlocked in front of me,
    commiting plagiarism for all to see.

    And now suprised,
    you find you never knew me.




    Submitted on 2006-07-29 12:21:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hmm... this is a pretty cool poem. I like the parts where you made it rhyme. :)
    The ending, where it says "you find you never knew me," kind of reminds me of myself and how people don't really know me at all. A lot of them think I'm just a happy-go-lucky person, but I'm not, really.
    Well... great write.
    | Posted on 2006-07-29 00:00:00 | by Lavender | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
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