Oh look somebody's dead. A good mystery is always better in a poem than a novel, save for Agatha Christie :) Made quite a bit of sense this one, I have a feeling she killed herself. Could be just me. Thank you for the lovely read. Cheers Azuire
This was pretty good, but I do think it could use some slight work. If anything you could just make this into a short story, or in paragraph form, that might help it, but that's just me, lol. Keep the pen to paper and good luck!
I love the title! And the first stanza gave me goosebumps (the good kind). I reeaaally liked the whole thing, especially the way you ended it, it was lovely. The only thing I found strange was the second stanza, but I didn't dwell on it becuase I thought everything was great! Keep up the very good work :)