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    dots Submission Name: for what you diddots
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    Author: bbcherry
    Elite Ratio:    3.07 - 79/34/16
    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 1080
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 199



    Description:
       what you did gave me scars, now i cannot forget.


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    dots for what you diddots
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    tears of sarrow
    no one knows
    because my screams are silent
    staining my sleaves
    i see your face
    my heart full of shame
    and a scar to remember what is now lost




    Submitted on 2006-07-29 14:37:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      short sweet and to the point ^_^ good go i like it ^_^
    | Posted on 2006-08-11 00:00:00 | by Doom_Hammer | [ Reply to This ]
      it is about loosing a person close to you and the pain you go through after they dont come back it think it s good quick to the point i like it noticed a spelling mistake but that does not effect the the emotion of the poem good liked it :)

    Rak ^ )
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    | Posted on 2006-08-11 00:00:00 | by dark figure | [ Reply to This ]
      cool but whats it about??
    | Posted on 2006-07-30 00:00:00 | by butterflygirl27 | [ Reply to This ]


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