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    dots Submission Name: Sing to medots
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    Author: Lavender
    ASL Info:    20/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 101/125/59
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Misc/Happy
    Total Views: 955
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 496



    Description:
       I came up with this a few days ago... decided to post it on Elite.


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    dotsSing to medots
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    Sing me a song like an old lullaby
    Sing to your heart's content
    Sing to me about anything you desire
    Sing till your heart's content

    Sing to me about pixies and fairies
    Maybe about elves and unicorns
    Sing to me about whatever you can think of
    Maybe about heaven as well

    Sing me a pure song about clean rivers
    Maybe about flying in the sky
    I want you to sing me something
    Sing me a sweet lullaby




    Submitted on 2006-07-29 15:54:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This was so nice and cute and sweet.

    I think it's just fine as it is. If you start adding to it like's been suggested then you may end up taking away from it instead.
    | Posted on 2006-07-31 00:00:00 | by little_theif | [ Reply to This ]
      it was a very good pice but if you add a bit more it mite help
    | Posted on 2006-07-30 00:00:00 | by Phil Eads | [ Reply to This ]
      aww bubz this was sweet, u have a good idea going here, if u add summat to it let me know,
    keep em cummin
    kyrenia
    | Posted on 2006-07-29 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]


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