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    dots Submission Name: When I Knewdots
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    Author: Suicidalchild51
    ASL Info:    15/f/wa
    Elite Ratio:    3.19 - 402/332/83
    Words: 178
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 174
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1176



    Description:
       Its about Devin of corse, i changed the ending as i was putting it on the site hope you like


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    dotsWhen I Knewdots
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    At first I didn't think,
    That we were gonna last,
    All because I wasn't over,
    The boy of my past.

    But as time went on,
    I felt more for you,
    I started to forget,
    The memories i held on to.

    I began to make new ones,
    With you in every thought,
    Because with you,
    I never felt distraught.

    You were like the weed,
    You smoked everyday;addicted,
    I couldnt live without you,
    Loved to hold you when we kicked it.

    I realized I loved you,
    When I looked into your eyes,
    The way you looked at me,
    Is the look that causes cryes.

    That day you broke up with me,
    On April twenty fourth,
    I felt a pain inside me,
    I never felt before.

    Now I lie here,
    Drowning in my sorrows,
    And I worry,
    Today of the tomorrow.

    I just want you back,
    In the middle of my soul,
    Breathing in that weed,
    Every single bowl.

    Just come back home,
    Into my heart,
    Ment it together,
    Because it fell apart.




    Submitted on 2006-07-29 18:25:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Wow. You seem pretty distraught. Be careful, you love him very much i can tell, i had a boyfriend who smoked weed though and he got sent to jail for it cause it made him do some pretty wacky stuff. It's an amazing poem and i know how you feel over and over again.
    | Posted on 2006-07-30 00:00:00 | by BloodtornAngel | [ Reply to This ]



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