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    dots Submission Name: fakedots
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    Author: faileddesign
    ASL Info:    19/m/nyc
    Elite Ratio:    0.89 - 0/1/10
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 387
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    Bytes: 791



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       growing up is it worhth it?


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    dotsfakedots
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    feeling false

          forcing you never to know
    never to be
    what you beleived
    what you stood for was a lie
    tormenting you to beleive
    you are wrong
    if only you knew
    what they do
    forcing you down
    killing you
    with out pain
    a spirit waisted
    a soul
    not to be excepted
    for here lies your punishment
    not to be
    not to live
    to die with out
    a beleif
    never knowing
    the power of a mind

    raised to follow
    trained to lose
    =
    the definition of fake
    denied rights to think
    rights to be
    you are false
    you are nothing
    not by your own design
    soleless forced!





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