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    dots Submission Name: I Get Confuseddots
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    Author: PaulLuvsGod
    Elite Ratio:    3.46 - 27/40/22
    Words: 230
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
    Total Views: 1786
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1290



    Description:
       I wrote this back in High School at a point when I felt a lot of confusion and I was unhappy with the way things seemed be going. I felt kinda lost and confused, hence the title I Get Confused.


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    dotsI Get Confuseddots
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    Sometimes when things donít seem to be going right
    And I donít know what to do
    Should I give up in this race or put up a good fight
    When all I do doesnít seem to be true

    (Chorus)
    I feel so confused
    I feel so confused
    I just donít know what to do, I donít know what to do
    Donít know what to do

    It seems like there is nothing I can do
    I want to change it, but it feels so impossible
    When all I want to do is get back to you
    This situation stays the same itís unworkable

    This problem is like a crazy out of control zoo,
    A crazy out of control zoo

    (Chorus)
    I feel so confused
    I feel so confused
    I just donít know what to do, I donít know what to do
    Donít know what to do

    I sometimes feel so mad and angry
    I just canít get you out of my head, I canít forget about it
    It can make me feel so sad that it is not resolved

    (Bridge)
    Why, Why, Why Must it be this way
    Why, Why, Why Canít I forget about it

    (Chorus)
    I feel so confused
    I feel so confused
    I just donít know what to do, I donít know what to do
    Donít know what to do




    Submitted on 2004-05-18 08:01:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      awwwe...this is sweet in a sad way. If your fighting with someone I hope you get it all resolved, I'm not much of a lyrics person myself, but even this caught my attention, I really like it. THe "Not resolved" line is what makes me think you might be in an argument with someone, or are remembering one and writing about it. Hope things work out for you, friend. And welcome to the site! ::Presses button on automatic confetti thrower and celebrates your arrival:: Welcome welcome!! ::dances away:: ~Sicobe R. Crow
    | Posted on 2004-05-18 00:00:00 | by Crow | [ Reply to This ]


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