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    dots Submission Name: King shitdots
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    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 165
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 860
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1056



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       iono if this kinda shit from me is gettin old to you guys...but juss lemme know if you like it


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    dotsKing shitdots
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    see the fact is/
    I make shit burn like matches/
    and theres no way you can match this/
    i can't take you serious, man cause youze a wack bitch/
    you fail to make the realization,to the points that I"m makin'/
    I spit acid, you shrivel up like a raisin/

    they said I lost it/
    time to pay the cost bitch/
    you donn know shit/
    your default is forefeit/

    yeah your default is forefeit/
    I got nothin to gain with/
    battling a novice/
    juss tellin it like it is/
    for you, the fact is/
    this rap shit/
    goin nowhere fast/
    its time the kings took over/
    now watch the AK blast/

    your doomed, like snake/
    you lose, I brake/
    you down/
    to size/
    you a clown/
    man recognize/


    what it is you up against/
    AK is the deadliest/
    we don't be on no friendly shit/
    if you want, you can come and try to hit me, trick!/





    Submitted on 2006-07-29 23:12:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      such a confrontational rapper. ur like elite skills's 50 cent, trying to challenge the world. the first stanza was the best. this one was ok. when is the fricking collabo coming out?
    | Posted on 2006-07-30 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      umm i'm not getting tired of it i love to read your [censored] especially when you're acting concieted lol. anyways keep 'em cumming.


    | Posted on 2006-08-03 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ]


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