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    dots Submission Name: wretched sundots
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    Author: ares_nuke_1
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    dotswretched sundots
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    oh thy wretched sun
    where art thou on this night
    too much hath been done
    why not shed us some light

    blood hath been spilled
    the suspect unknown
    oh thy wretched sun
    let his face be shown

    under every shadow he waits
    seeking to find new prey
    oh thy wretched sun
    kill the night and bring back the day

    at last the sun rises
    the murderous face be found
    oh thy wretched sun
    thanks for bringing the bad man down




    Submitted on 2006-07-30 00:00:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i think u over played it, with all the were art thou romeo stuff. if the plot was thicker, it would be ok. it to mellowdramadic-
    | Posted on 2006-07-30 00:00:00 | by Gwenith Louise | [ Reply to This ]


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