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    dots Submission Name: Reign of Filthdots
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    Author: EseanB
    ASL Info:    30/M/TN
    Elite Ratio:    2.38 - 99/138/84
    Words: 248
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 515
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1577



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    dotsReign of Filthdots
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    Of all the sacred nights,
    Tonight the Blood Moon reigns,
    I shall begin the errands which were assigned to me.

    Task number one,
    I must find the sweetest virgin,
    She will be the wife of my Master.

    Task number two,
    I need a pint the purest blood,
    It must come from the most innocent child.

    Task number three,
    I shall collect the evilest of man,
    Each representing one of the seven deadly sins.

    Now the ritual will begin,
    The sweetest virgin must drink the purest blood,
    Then she must seduce and savagely murder the seven sins of man.

    Admist the chaos our Master will rise,
    Seducing this evil virgin into His chambers,
    I shall enjoy hearing her screams as He fucks her with His devilish cock.

    When the months pass by,
    She will bear His demons upon every full moon,
    Tearing her apart at the seams during each birth.

    She will die from this,
    Only to be reborn like the Phoenix,
    Evil does not perish, it either sleeps or waits in the shadows.

    Come forth my servants of hell,
    Bow before the new ruler of Earth,
    He shall bless you with the souls of the slain.

    Toys for your pleasure,
    Strengthen our Master with the screams of the damned,
    Earn your ranks in the many levels of Hell.

    'Tis not the end,
    Only the beginning,
    So enjoy your last dream, for you will soon dream no more.




    Submitted on 2006-07-30 08:41:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Brilliant, I'm pretty sure I'm going to hell for just reading it, but I was probably going to hell anyways....Good stuff.
    | Posted on 2006-08-09 00:00:00 | by StanKross | [ Reply to This ]
      horribly good. i enjoyed every bit of it. that sort of third world dark creepieniess is an awesome way to go.Scary though:)

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    | Posted on 2006-07-30 00:00:00 | by bbcherry | [ Reply to This ]
      holy [censored]. That was...well...It had its graphic parts, but it just added to the whole attitude of the poem. I loved it, rather dark and satanic, but its all good. I love the concept though that you brought forth, the whole ritual thing you put into play made me want to keep reading. It was very dark and very very good. Keep it up man:)

    ->Dark Angel
    | Posted on 2006-07-30 00:00:00 | by drk_angl_17 | [ Reply to This ]


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