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    dots Submission Name: Wake Up, It Is A Beautiful Daydots
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    Author: ebflannery
    ASL Info:    24/
    Elite Ratio:    4.6 - 184/184/48
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 166
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 780



    Description:
       The day is a wasting!


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    dotsWake Up, It Is A Beautiful Daydots
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    Wake up, it is a beautiful day
    And I am lonely, waiting for you
    The sunshine is calling,
    We can go to the lake
    And eat a picnic lunch
    While you throw in your line
    We will relax in the shade
    Becoming intoxicated
    By the sweet smell of grass
    In the summertime.

    Wake up, it is a beautiful day
    And the morning has waned
    To the afternoon.
    Time is wasting, it flies quickly by
    And tomorrow, you will work
    Another week, full of stresses
    Another headache, from the strain
    Of being "responsible" and
    "Getting it done"

    So wake up, it is a beautiful day
    To relax and unwind
    And build memories together.




    Submitted on 2006-07-30 12:05:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      aww! this is cute! i think too many times people forget that everyone needs time to relax and just be together. we all get carried away in the being responsible and getting everything done. and dont build enough of the memories to last...you need the time to just be together with people you care about. i didnt really see n e thing wrong with this, you had a great message and it had good flow to the words. nice imagry too, creating the picture of of a picknic lunch at the lake, fishing and sitting there. nice ~Nichole
    | Posted on 2006-07-30 00:00:00 | by butterfly_chi5 | [ Reply to This ]



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