Description: i don't know. yet another sleep depraved piece of work. the quote at the end is supposed to be the poem whispered by the man in line 12. its actually from a book i recently read called "Coming Attractions" the book was alright but this little poem stuck w/ me.
this poem is about running but always being brought back to where you were running from. the man w/ flesh caught in his sneer is sybolizing whatever is keeping you from escaping. so i guess thats what it is.
This is a good poem but a little confusing, I'm sure it would make more sense to me if I read that book you read, but that's ok. I like the metaphores in it, and the wording. You did a good job on this piece. Hope to read more from you soon. :)