leave the word THE in ur write it fits. I'm intrigued by ur write, it's powerful. Too me it says that humanity is the same, but still unique. Each person is different, but are all trying to achieve the same goal. Brillant!!!
I would leave the word The in this write That word creates conclussion to the emotion you are writing about I find this write very thought provoking and this almost brings tears to my eyes because I can definately feel pain hidden behind your words Great Job God Bless Ron