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    dots Submission Name: Bright Eyesdots
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    Author: Dead Weight
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 43/69/27
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       For my boyfriend...?


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    dotsBright Eyesdots
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    Hey bright eyes,
    how's your day been?
    Who's the one thats makin you smile?
    Just a girl or a boy
    who walks down the street
    and smiles in your direction

    hey bright eyes
    look up here
    see your reflection in the bus window?
    Every time we pass a tree or a car

    Hey Bright eyes
    look in my direction
    pass your smile to me
    cuz its been a long day
    and i need to rest my weary eyes
    in yours


    hey bright eyes
    dont stop smilin in my direction




    Submitted on 2006-07-31 00:18:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I loved this, so simple, so sweet. I liked the familarity you feel especially with the repetition of 'hey bright eyes' it made me think of my boyfriend because he has these sparkly happy eyes all the time. I've added it to my fav's I just really enjoyed the simplicity so often you read poems that are full of descriptive angst, this was like a breath of fresh air.

    ~Sunset
    | Posted on 2006-08-01 00:00:00 | by sunset | [ Reply to This ]


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