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    Author: every48seconds
    ASL Info:    25/M/toronto
    Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 123/163/129
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    dotscountingdots
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    how many times
    must
    i be hurt
    how much slits
    must be made before i am put to rest
    how many times must i
    let the blood and tears hit the floor
    how many bullets are going to hit me
    when i start taking lifes
    how many ways are there for suicide
    and which one should i use
    which is good to die




    Submitted on 2006-07-31 08:55:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is very sad and again your expression of emotion comes through clearly. I hope this is just poetic expression and not true feelings within you. If it is, hang in there, really things always work themselves out. Life can really be hurtful and make you feel like how you wrote here. If you ever want to talk. feel free to IM me. Wonderful expression of despair and sadness, captured within your reigns that are bound in an unfair world!!!
    | Posted on 2006-08-08 00:00:00 | by Molly Densmore | [ Reply to This ]


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