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    dots Submission Name: lifes a liedots
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    Author: every48seconds
    ASL Info:    25/M/toronto
    Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 123/163/129
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       i was questioning life when i wrote it


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    dotslifes a liedots
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    what is life
    is it just something your given
    or something you recevied by accident
    how precious is it
    is it the one thing you care about
    and you try living every day as your last
    or is it meaningless
    and your life is just something to be given as a sacrifice
    is it really any good that your alive
    is it just a punishment for bad souls
    do souls even exist
    and if it is good that were alive
    and that we get to feel,hear,smell,see and touch our planet
    then why do we kill each other
    why do he mistreat each other and ourselfs
    tell me what is life
    so that i can die knowing what it really is




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      i can tell you the meaning of life....you may not like it but i will not lie to you!!! here's my scaled down version. ... "there is a time for everthing" and life is about each and every time you're squeezed, what comes out of you shows what kind of person you are. it's a purging of the death inside us all and awakening the soul. none of us asked to be born, that may not be fair but that is the way it is bro! so, what does it all mean? it means this....you must first come to fully understand who you are...introspection :) then understand the conditions which made you what you are......once you come to grasp both of those.....you will see what the meaning of life is....cuz you will see that in and of yourself, you are nothing and cannot bring yourself to life by the death you were born in to. without God, you have no chance at being anything but dead. i am not a religious freak or a preacher of any kind, i'm a crazy haired tattooed rock star (lol)that has been everywhere from san diego to paris france and done more drugs and drinking and women that you can imagine. i'm still young too!!! and i can tell you this....."come to me all you who are weary and i will give you rest". when you've tried everything else that this world has to offer and are exhausted from it....you will still feel empty. it's not about you, it's not about me, it's about God. it's about sacrifice. trust him, it is impossible for him to lie and he always keeps his promises. i leave you with these words.... "in my anguish i cried to the Lord, and he answered..... by setting me free".
    | Posted on 2007-08-30 00:00:00 | by scissorhands | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this one.
    I was wondering the same thing today.
    Thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2007-08-11 00:00:00 | by emoxday | [ Reply to This ]
      depressing. but i think its something we all think about. i used 2 ask similar questions every day. and i still do but less often. i just figure we are here and we may as well make the most out of. if ur going thru a tuff time all i can say is it usually gets better.
    | Posted on 2006-08-08 00:00:00 | by chookie101 | [ Reply to This ]
      I often ask these same questions. Even at my age, you wonder about purpose, destiny, fate... love... cruelity etc... Nicely put together and it expresses age old questions why? Why is it some people seem to get every break and nice things happen to them, but not me? Why is life easy for some, but not me or you? Is it lessons that we need to learn as we grow? Or a slap in the face every turn you make or efforts for the good, go unnoticed. Etc... This is a very good poem about all of these things, it is thought provoking, obvisouly... it got my mind thinking. Like I said before. Life is just not fair.
    | Posted on 2006-08-08 00:00:00 | by Molly Densmore | [ Reply to This ]


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