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    dots Submission Name: Arachnidedots
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    Author: Soulraven
    ASL Info:    31/Male/Illinois
    Elite Ratio:    4.05 - 510/481/142
    Words: 33
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 868
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       "Life is Simply Jargon interpret it as you wish."

    Christopher Bowen


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    dotsArachnidedots
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    Black widow walking her network
    Stepping on filament covered with murk.

    Spider wearing a red dress
    Caught in her perfect mess.

    Arachnide's flowing nightgown
    Forbidding my feet from touching the ground.




    Submitted on 2004-05-18 11:31:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really don't know what to make of this piece, but I like it. maybe you could put a clue as to who you are and why you are trapped. But I do believe it could stand alone.
    | Posted on 2004-05-18 00:00:00 | by nicelyJ | [ Reply to This ]


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