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    dots Submission Name: Willing To Fightdots
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    Author: bjafreak
    Elite Ratio:    2.42 - 4/7/11
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Society
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    Are you willing to fight?
    Fight for your life
    Your freedom
    Your love

    Are you willing to Die?
    Die for your freedom
    for your love

    Are you willing to stay Faithful?
    Faithful to you
    Faithful to me
    And everyone around you

    Are you willing to Fight?
    Fight for what you believe in
    Fight for everything you know
    Fight for what is right

    Are you willing to Trust?
    Trust me
    Trust your love
    Trust everyone and believe what they say

    You must be willing to fight all of your life,
    You must be willing to Die all of your life,
    You must be willing to be faithful all of your life

    You must be who you are
    You must be you.




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      I'm not sure what to make of this. Too many conflicting images. Fighting for freedom, usually means not believing everything everybody says. I get the gist of it, it just seems to meander from an actual point. The start is good, but it lost me. Fighting, dying, loving, faith, and trust are not always things that work well together. Not bad, just jumbled.
    | Posted on 2006-08-01 00:00:00 | by Mr_Eff | [ Reply to This ]
      true, we live to survie and survie to live, the world is like crap set on fire. (i luv fire, im a pyro and i luv ur pic!!!!!!!!!) but i think if we all stop fighting, there will be peace. but people have to big of egos. so good luck with your battle with how ever ur talking about....
    | Posted on 2006-08-01 00:00:00 | by Gwenith Louise | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this poem... it speaks of an individuality that many have forgotten in todays world. Everything is all about conformity and organization today. Anyway, I like this poem a lot, keep up the good work.
    ~Melissa~
    | Posted on 2006-07-31 00:00:00 | by black_beauty18 | [ Reply to This ]


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