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    dots Submission Name: Music & Questionsdots
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    Author: Castalia
    ASL Info:    666/N/Hell
    Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 16/33/33
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 119
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 832



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    dotsMusic & Questionsdots
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    Don't you understand?

    I still need answers.

    I need explainations for these feelings,

    All this illogical bullshit.



    And if all those awkward silences were for nothing,

    Why are you still here,

    Standing next to me

    Ready to wipe my tears away?



    If those songs you wrote to me,

    Were all fake and meaningless,

    Why do you keep coming

    and why do I keep listening?



    I'll hold my breath,

    As you hold my heart.

    It's your to keep,

    And I'll forget to love...


    Love as I never did.




    Submitted on 2006-07-31 23:32:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      ...Nice, I like the way you displayed the 'points' and your feelings. In a way I know how you feel, like:

    I'll hold my breath,
    As you hold my heart.
    It's yours to keep,
    And I'll forget to love...

    Love as I never did.

    Good job on the poem.
    | Posted on 2006-08-01 00:00:00 | by Foreseer | [ Reply to This ]



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