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    dots Submission Name: Just for the fun of it..dots
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    Author: Mr_Eff
    Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 61/62/39
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 141
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 864



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       I have no idea what this means, or where it was going. It was just a test to see what I could rhyme.


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    My words are so absurd, lesbian thespians claim bragging rights/As I sit in my dark tower, trying to see life through a dragons eyes/Spit manic, at the disco, my disc sows the seeds of panic/Ice cold, sink foes, with sick flows that are titanic/I live between heartbeats, ghost dogs and hate Oprah/Out for major blood, wear my hood like an irate cobra/Hate to say I told ya, that's a lie, in fact I love it/My lack of humility's what's killing me, but I'm just so far above it/Dry hump the american dream, motivated by fear and loathing/My mirror has two faces, both of wich are always gloating/My brute like hatred, has created the perfect demons/The darkness that festers in me, has left my soul with lesions/The inner monster has conquered, it's hideous how he controls/I blame my niggling doubts, hissing insidiously from their holes.




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      this kills.
    | Posted on 2007-08-29 00:00:00 | by DBC | [ Reply to This ]
      killing me, but I'm just so far above it/Dry hump the american dream

    that's one of the best lines i've read in a very long time. this was really good. ur rhyming skills are amazing. just when i thought u were moving on to rhyming with other words u would bring a rhyme back and suprise the hell outta me.
    | Posted on 2006-08-07 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      hmmm. it almost reminds me of a rap song. Whether that is good or bad...well, that's up for you to decide. Very interesting non-the less. peace-
    | Posted on 2006-08-01 00:00:00 | by night_angel | [ Reply to This ]
      Its intereting how you state that you are lacking in humility. That you think you are above it all. Why is that?
    It also sounds to me as though you think you are demon posessed. Is that what your feeling?
    | Posted on 2006-08-03 00:00:00 | by Peachpitt | [ Reply to This ]
      this was a tight verse. Seems like a freestyle almost
    but these lines were tight- has created the perfect demons/The darkness that festers in me, has left my soul with lesions

    the flow was descent and the rhymes were reall good.

    Keep it up
    PC
    | Posted on 2006-08-03 00:00:00 | by SinCeer05 | [ Reply to This ]



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