just leave for another
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well i guess for the first time ever i wrote a rap that i was able to finish.i know its not good but im proud to say at least i try and finished this time.
just leave for another
you ripped my heart out and cared for another i don't mind but i'll always remember the past and what you put me through and how our lives went seperate and you never gave into the pain, thoughts of me how you once said we were meant to be yeah i'll always knew this day would come but i thought... just give it a day give it some time to let it run through your mind and when you asked me see if ya still cared or if you even dared to just let go move on get another yep it was true and now we're through you've given up your mind went corrupt and now im all alone in this crazy world nope theres nothing i can do to get through to you cause your gone time and time again i try to get you outta my head walking 'round like the undead but your stuck there i pretend not to care and it shows on my face and through all of my clothes i guess we weren't meant to be what you said to me you'll always be just a memory... |
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| Hmmm. Love always bites. Well. Most of the time. Sometimes, it is not meant to be. And it's good to break up? Who knows. Although, it'd be nice to find that 'one', and just stick with them. Usually, doesn't work that way though. Sad world... -- Jason Clement | Posted on 2006-08-01 00:00:00 | by Jason_Clement | [ Reply to This ] | well i like this poem a lot haha but one thing for like line 6 id put it a little shorter...like stop between "seperate" and "and". and start from "and" on line 7...but other than that its good! | | Posted on 2006-08-02 00:00:00 | by butterflygirl27 | [ Reply to This ] | yeah i like this a lot. when you wrote: | yeah i'll always knew this day would come but i thought... just give it a day give it some time i remembered thinking that a lot, about a lot of people. i feel like i connect with it differently. i'm actually not sure what i mean lol. but, almost as if i feel the same way towards people i've loved but not a girlfriend. its strange because i know this was meant to be directed towards a lover, but after i read this i feel i understand what your going through because of various people i've known. | Posted on 2006-08-03 00:00:00 | by chottooni | [ Reply to This ] | |
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