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one last hit (MOTHER)

Author: Sera Rojas
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mother do i need to be so HIGH?

one last hit (MOTHER)

(mother do you think IM goo d enough)
all your money couldnt pay my way
so tell your children not to walk my way (hahah)
and yeah it is just a waste of time

hush now baby baby dont you cry
mothers gonna take you to the
methadone clinic
and your gonna leave a thousand time s more
ooh mama you brought me in now take me fuckin OUT
at 3am when my legs feel they will break
and i cant get warm and i cry and shake
all the blankets and kisses
cant take this way
you cant understand
where i am right now.
poor mama you just tried TOO hard so:
at 3am lets just make this end
your credit cards about just ran out
and i
i just want
and lets make it
a big one this time

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