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    dots Submission Name: division and ashlanddots
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    Author: Sera Rojas
    Elite Ratio:    0.6 - 5/5/8
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       another nite in chicago thats all folks :)


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    dotsdivision and ashlanddots
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    close the door turn out the light
    you know i wont be home tonight
    except for you
    to carry things that must get through
    Ashland Avenue in a snowblind blur
    and you wait at some bodega
    darkened in sepia tones
    to carry things that must get through
    and i hear your footseps on the wooden floors
    and the wolves stop howling at the doors
    we got thru just one more night
    so close the door turn out the light




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