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Hate me


Author: MidnightMelody
ASL Info:    18/f/US
Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 44 /52 /55
Words: 221
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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Hate me



Hate me today
Hate me tomorrow
Hate me forever and
I'll hate you too.

All these voices in my head
won't leave me alone
They remind me of what I did
and I wish they never saw a word

For I can't stand you to know
I had wished every second
that I never sent you away
it's be so easier if you'd just...

Hate me today
Hate me tomorrow
Hate me forever and
I'll hate you too

I sit here all day
on the realm of my insanity
watching you go online and off
as much as you please

it hurts so much to know
that i stare at your name and hope
that give me just one quick hello
but you'll never do that and
i'm on my own..

Hate me today
Hate me tomorrow
Hate me forever and
I'll hate you too

As much as I am hoping
that you'd hate me, so
I can do the same
you won't ever hate me
and that brings me so much pain
I just wish right now
that I'd be able to move on
but here I am wanting for you to...

Hate me today
Hate me tomorrow
Hate me forever and
I'll hate you too




Submitted on 2006-08-01 21:54:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this was great so true about life in general

great perspective on the word hate

great read

sandman
| Posted on 2006-08-02 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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