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    dots Submission Name: Pollyanna Gets Diagnosed with Cancerdots
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    Author: annie0888
    ASL Info:    49/f/LA
    Elite Ratio:    4.76 - 327/382/122
    Words: 17
    Class/Type: Misc/Satire
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    dotsPollyanna Gets Diagnosed with Cancerdots
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    "The results are in,"
    she said with a grin,
    "and once again
    ... I'm positive!"




    Submitted on 2006-08-01 22:22:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA....ha..ha...wait, I'm laughing about cancer?

    I just burst out laughing at this. And to think it's about cancer! I love your satirical mind. You're like a modern Stephen Leacock.

    Pollyanna wants a cracker!
    A
    carcinogenic
    worldly
    cracker
    that
    slowly
    kills
    her
    | Posted on 2007-06-13 00:00:00 | by manwithnoname | [ Reply to This ]
      Pollyanna Gets Diagnosed with Cancer
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    "The results are in,"
    she said with a grin,
    "and once again
    ... I'm positive!"


    I fear 99.9 % of those who read this bizarre little satire will equate 'cancer' with Hester Prynn's scarlet letter and miss the entire point of this lunatic exercise. It's as absurd as a dying man's life flashing before his eyes and putting him to sleep. I wonder if Pollyanna ever considered the high score in golf to be a gift from the gods (of lobotomized golfers, at least).

    Ah, Polly! You'll have a grin on your face and the positive demeanor of a mannequin long before rigor ever tweaks that jolly face! OK, I'm becoming sarcastic, so I'd better say well done on the martian haiku ;)

    Take care.
    Bill.
    | Posted on 2006-08-02 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      Why is it sometimes so hard to express simple sentiments?.................... I suppose that's what poetry takes on....
    I'll try it again:
    These are my own thoughts originally based on an assumption that this was a writing exercise- which may be wrong.
    If it were real, the writing would take on an entirely different tone, I thought.
    And now you've explicitly said this is not so. ....
    Regardless, the point should still be made, and especially because so many others thought literally, that it is hard to joke about cancer because that is the dread disease of our time. Although we might be better off if we could. At least according to Norman Cousins....
    It would be like making light of the Black Plague in medievil days or the flu after WWI. Not that you couldn't do it. It's just that people would tend to react emotionally.
    In terms of being optimistic vs. pessimistic in general...a typical analogy of seeing whether a glass of water is "half full" or "half empty."
    We know how Pollyanna sees it and unflinchingly, and no matter what.
    In a way it seems like she could use a slap upside her stupid head....
    regardless of where she pokes her little dimpled , braided smiling head- in poetry and IRL ...
    A "bit" of cynicism pours forth in the poem, which I appreciate.
    Your rhyming adds to color the tone against the backdrop of cancer.
    Similiar to rhymes like scary movies that have children sing-songing rhymes in the attic of the old haunted house....
    .....optimistic little fiends that the children are...merrily singing happy little rhyming tunes while chucky is sawing off their parents heads...
    Anyway, it adds to the effect. Incidentally, not centrally.
    I don't know if you've encountered Gary Larson's comedy books. You'd probably enjoy them, if you haven't already read them.
    I hate being bored. This was interesting.
    Thanks for writing.

    -az
    | Posted on 2006-08-01 00:00:00 | by azure_warrior | [ Reply to This ]
      OMGosh...for real?
    You're asking for "thoughts...", well...from an outsider looking in, I would say that I hope if this is you described here, you can beat it...

    From a writers standpoint...you've taken a very, very real moment in time, and made it as black and white as the results.

    Not sure what else to say. You've said a lot in this little piece.

    Peace and longevity to you...
    Kimmy
    | Posted on 2006-08-01 00:00:00 | by KimmyMim | [ Reply to This ]
      Kinda...sadistic. I'd really love to see her play the "Happy Game"..or was it "Glad Game" with this one!

    Heh.

    Hey all, I'm just trying to get my reciprocation up. I'm down in the -'s pretty far. So, don't feel the need to comment on my work. I'm trying to get back into the swing of things at Elite. Think of it as a favor from me to you! Thanks for the read!
    <3BCute
    | Posted on 2006-08-24 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, umm, I didn't undersatand it. I think I completely missed the point, thought it seems to be funny, like a clever inside joke. I like 'She said with a grin' image; makes her look like a pixi, smiling impishly. But what about, I wonder...? Hmm. I love the rhythm and rhyming, and it has character. I just don't get it, though.

    ?? Aetha
    | Posted on 2006-08-02 00:00:00 | by Aetha Daemon | [ Reply to This ]


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