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Author: Itzmeemiflee
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Words: 147
Class/Type: Poetry /Death
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She sees him standing
next to the tree
leaning on one foot
shoulder touches bark
she walks over
arms across her chest
shielding herself
she reaches him
too fast
too soon
words fly
mouths work
his eyes grow big
hers begin to water
he shouts at her
'lies,' he yells,
'All lies.'
she tells him it's over
there is nothing there
he takes her shoulders
shakes her fast
her head rolls on her neck
she closes her eyes
willing it to end
he shoves her
pushes her to the ground
her face pressed to the grass
she watches an ant
crawl along a blade
as he
yells at her
'i ain't no cheat.'
pulling at her hair
pinching her skin
he punches and kicks
she huddles together
holding her knees to her chest
shielding herself
she reaches Him
too fast
too soon.

Submitted on 2006-08-02 00:07:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  sounds like an aggressive boyfriend to be obvious, it was pretty good with alot of imagry, the girl has my pitty, too bad for her, i suck with comments so i'm sorry if this isn't what you wanted.
thanks for the submitting, good job

| Posted on 2006-08-02 00:00:00 | by Abort_Chaotic | [ Reply to This ]

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