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    dots Submission Name: * Faithdots

    Author: Caotic_Disaster
    ASL Info:    16/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 447/349/148
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       i kinda like this one...im not sure if it makes sense...it kinda came from nowhere...tell me what u think

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    dots* Faithdots

    What happened here
    Look at us
    There is no us anymore
    You never let me explain
    You were to engulfed in your anguish to listen
    I didn't do it
    It wasn't me
    It was here
    She came from nowhere
    I thought I would never see her again
    But she came back
    She may look like me
    But we are nothing alike
    Then after she destroyed my life
    She vanished
    And everything would have been alright
    If only you would have belived me
    If only you had a little faith.

    Submitted on 2006-08-02 07:51:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Nice poem. People just come and go it seems...

    -- Jason Clement
    | Posted on 2006-08-06 00:00:00 | by Jason_Clement | [ Reply to This ]
      i like it, when i was your age my poems used to come from nowhere, but held alot of meaning, too bad i couldn't talk to you more since you had to go.
    | Posted on 2006-08-02 00:00:00 | by Abort_Chaotic | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this ive had people in my like that were like that too. and i understand how hard it is to pick the peicese once they leave again great write
    | Posted on 2006-09-09 00:00:00 | by sweet_rayne | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this, I had a person like that in my life, you had a lot of meaning on what you said... you put a lot in to this and got nothin it looks like, you should move on well if you can.... not unless you wrote this just as a rant...
    | Posted on 2006-08-02 00:00:00 | by Gmann | [ Reply to This ]
      this was alright. i understood it. wasn't really too amazed by it -- maybe cause as you put it -- I was too engulfed in my anguish to listen. Ofcourse you were refering to someone else -- but I can relate to that. So yeah. Thanks for your comment by the way.
    | Posted on 2006-08-02 00:00:00 | by Solomon Disease | [ Reply to This ]

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