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    dots Submission Name: Soul Matesdots
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    Author: L.V
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 0/1/1
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 548
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       just a good feeling


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    dotsSoul Matesdots
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    You are the tick
    I am the tock

    You are the brick
    I am the mortar


    You are the bar
    I am the beat

    You are the ebb
    I am the flow

    You are the sheet
    I am the halliyard

    You are one step
    I am the other.




    Submitted on 2006-08-02 08:33:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hi!

    This poem is straight to the point and really sweet. I love the metaphors, all of them and it sounds like such a great relationship.

    I'd love to see more of these, I was dissapointed when you stopped.

    Good work though,

    Steff
    | Posted on 2006-08-02 00:00:00 | by steffunni | [ Reply to This ]


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